This week in class we have been writing narrative story’s this is my one and I hope you like it!

” The Mystery in the old house ”

Lily got a shiver down her spine while walking though the old house with Caroline the old owner, and Abigail the real-estate agent. She asked her sister Katy why mum and dad where making them move but she didn’t answer back.
“Sold!”
Lily herd Abigail yell out to mum and dad, she felt sick because she was were moving here. That night she couldn’t get any sleep, she was thinking about how old that house was and what would happen if it was haunted. In the morning she was a tired wreck and didn’t want to start packing for the new house. In the car Lily was so upset that she had to move to a piece of junk. She didn’t want any of this to happen. But it did, before she knew it an old, wooden house was standing in front of her.

Lily was shocked at how big it looked from the outside. But didn’t want to go in, Lily’s mum turned the key to open the door. Katy was so excited she ran up to her room, however Lily didn’t want to go anywhere, but she knew she had to. She crept up to her room slowly and then opened the door. In her room was a huge bed with a bathroom and a small cupboard. She pushed all the old fashioned furniture out into the hall way and cleaned the room to make it hers. She could hear loud music coming from Katy’s room until it stopped then she heard yelling saying “LILY HELP!” she didn’t care because Lily was in a bad mood.

Mum yelled out “dinner time!” Lily raced down the stairs as her tummy was grumbling. As soon as she saw the food on the table, she was so excited to eat after a long hard day cleaning her room. While she was eating dinner she noticed that her sister Katy wasn’t there, she was confused for a little bit until she thought she might be sleeping or still unpacking. After dinner she was walking up the stairs when she saw a white light coming from Katy’s room, she thought that was fine so she hopped into her bed. After the lights where turned off as mum and dad where going to bed, she was wondering if Katy was okay and what happened to her. Before she fell asleep she heard someone like Katy saying ” HELP LILY ! I NEED YOUR HELP ! PLEASE HELP! She freaked out and covered her head with her soft blanket, eventually she fell asleep.

After Lily was woken from her deep sleep, she thought of what happened last night and had the courage to go into Katy’s room. So she got up and slowly walked into Katy’s room as mum and dad where still asleep. First she peeked through the door and then opened it. She honestly thought her room look really cool but then she noticed that there was a really, really old picture hanging of the wall on top of Katy’s bed. She flipped the old picture around a found a note in the back of it it said – I have your sister. I will keep her until you leave this house for good, and never come back! – she froze as she read the scary letter. As soon as she finished the reading the letter she ran down stairs to show mum and dad the letter, they froze while they were reading it as well, but they also realised that this writing was like Abigail’s writing they also thought that it was the exact same, Lily’s mum and dad called the police straight away.

A few days after Abigail was arrested for kidnapping a child and that she did this without anyone knowing. The Smith family lived happily in their new house on Phantoms Lane. They also realised in their new house something wasn’t right. Lily still was worried if it will happen again and is still upset with the dread in her life now. She also was very curious about the house that was all alone in the corner of the street.

Thanks for reading my story. I hope you liked it!